I know her abilities section has just scratched the surface, so don't mind it (though I am willing to accept any suggestions before I get to it). Anyways, I just want to know where to improve in the other parts before I delve deeper into the character's skills. So, here is Seitei!
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I know there is a LOT of work to do on Akemi, and that some plot holes in her story may need to be filled. But I hope a simple review will help me determine what exactly I have to do in order to make her a great character.
Greetings, I wanted to ask for fellow editors to check out the Chūichi Uzumaki page and see what work it needs. Thank you for your time.
I've been doing plenty of expansion towards making her something unique, not just in power, but in personality. I'm building her up to make someone unique, and I want to know if I'm going in the right direction.
Ash has already given her a look a couple times, although he didn't give me a particularly detailed review. And I'd also like some input from other users as well, since I want her to be top notch for Golden Darkness with the project's apparent increasing popularity.
I'm here to bring in Heiwa Uchiha, and don't you dare go soft on me!
I'm usually to arrogant to let others judge me. But, i"m interested in what will be said. Also, If I go around judging others without letting ya judge myself, then I'd give ammos to my haters. So....Here it is. Andd on't be scared.
I would like this character reviewed he is still somewhat a work in progress the only thing that really needs changed currently is the personality, i am still doing additions to the backstory as well as the techniques http://narutofanon.wikia.com/wiki/Ryu_Uzumaki_(Uzu)
Shikaniku Nara/Personality and Relationships
Shikaniku Nara/Abilities and Powers
The same character btw, I just split up the pages cause i'm me^.
Senkai. I've turned him into a single page cause of some stuff. Anyway, I just gotta know where I'm lacking in this page.
I would like to submit Senjō... Just so see what you guys like of her so far... Yes. I know I need to work on her. I just want to know how good the material is so far.
I want to know how I can improve Bobu Nomi because right now quite a few people think he is too strong compared to the other DS characters, though I can't see the reason why. I hope you guys would give me some criticism on what aspects need improving for Bobu.
Aside from the Appearance and Personality sections, could you all help look at the rest? Thank you.
I would like a review on Shiguma. I honestly just want to know how I can make him better.
I know their personality sections are weak. Personality is my weak point since I usually take an organic approach to story telling.
Hey there, everyone! So this here is the review board. As you might have garnered from the introduction, the review board is a place where you can submit your own articles for critique by a select number of users, which include the admins: Berserkchart486 and myself, Ash9876. There are two primary reasons for the review board. The administrative reason is to narrow down the selection process for the Featured Article. The other reason is for you guys! Should you guys want a honest, in-depth analysis of your progress as a writer then feel free to drop your articles by! It's all a matter of what you want to do.
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