Add more detail to her. The page doesn't offer a lot in terms of detail, such as her abilities section being pretty flat. Why does she have the abilities she does, mostly looking at the advanced natures?
Shiromaru Sugimori obtains sage transformation due to being a progenerator of Jugo's clan during Kaguya's time.
2. How will your character learn Sage Mode? Which animal will they learn it from?
As a white zetsu he absorbed nature energy triggering his transformation and resetting his mind. Due to Jugo's clan's connection to ryuchi cave he will seek the white snake sage; only to improperly learn from a snake with which he has a contract giving him an imperfect sage mode.
3. Initially, will your character have access to an Imperfect Sage Mode or a Perfect Sage Mode? If Imperfect, will it progress to a Perfect Sage Mode?
He has Sage transformation and it will progress to Imperfect Sage Mode
5. What are the drawbacks of the Cursed Seal?
Because Sage transformation is based on yang chackra, and yang chackra has a tendency to turn white zetsu's into trees, prolonged usage causes plants to painfully sprout from him similar to the black rods in Obito's first usage of wood release.
5. Briefly detail what your plans are, at the moment, for your character if he/she is approved for Sage Mode and/or Cursed Seal? What will they do with it? How will they improve or utilize it in a fashion that is unique to them, rather than a rehash of canon character usage or maybe even other fanon characters?
He can change his forms, such as an arm blade, wings, or canons, depending on the situation. He is able to enter full transformation like those with a cursed seal though this is taxing on his form (see drawbacks). He can partially transform to reduce the drawbacks but not negate them.
Well, nevermind about the icon (seeing I decided a more easier approach). But, I am wondering how to translate English to Japanese properly (seeing Naruto has different kanji then what I am use to sometimes). Know any good sites? (I tried the ones suggested in the Manual of Style, but they did not work for me (mostly more then ONE translation appears, aka more kanji, etc and idk what one to choose). As such, I need help in translation :3
Hey, decided to make my own infoboxes, some the admins/mods said the "naruto canon from the official site thing" is broken. But even so, it be good still know how to replace the Mangekyō Sharingan icons anyways.
Yeah, wish I could fix them but they are shot beyond several admins and formal ones ability, and central appears to not care/can't as they never fulfilled it. It's pretty whatever at the end of the day
The infobox for Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique is damaged so you might as well describe your character as being capable of performing the technique as he can't be added. As for the rest I think he should be able of adding them. I don't know if this is still required but it wouldn't hurt to say how your char got these techniques. But then again just a suggestion
I would say you should probably make your own template as opposed the the semantic one you are using. Semantic is broken and beyond anyone on the wiki's ability to fix. Serk couldn't, Nari couldn't, I can't. With your own custom template of using one that people let borrow, you prevent these errors and can add techniques to the character manually.