Njalm2 i need your help.I received a warning for accusing a user named Prodigy for taken credit for Takigakure. As you may know it is a canon village.He claims that it belongs to him which,It doesn't it belongs to the creators of Naruto,Kishimotio.Can you you help?I tried to edit the page but he just un-edited it.
When you see a property tag on someone's page, it means that the article itself belongs to them. In this case, the content doesn't belong to Prodigy, however, the article does. You must always ask the article's owner for permission before editing their page.
Hi, Njalm! I know we don't talk too much, but it's good to see you're back. I've been in touch with your situation, although I don't know any details except for the ones in the message walls. I don't want to intrude, but just know what you have my support on whatever issue you had, because I know that, if you did act wrong, you didn't do it purposely and, in all honesty, I didn't notice anything was going on around here :P
You've done much for the community, because when you were nominated an admin, after a short while, there was more organization in your field of action. Sorry if this message is all over, I'm HORRIBLE at organizing my thoughts XD
I'm just happy you guys came to a middle ground and something was arranged.
I would like to create a clan called the Ochara Clan. The Ochara's history is that many years ago, a few members of the Uchiha clan realised that there was a way to use the Sharingan without the rage and without the revenge. When they had realised that, something happened to the Sharingan and it made it blue. They got kicked out of the Uchiha clan and decided to create their own clan outside of Konohagakure. The new clan set base at a secret place in the fire country and had its own school where the clan got taught how to use their abilities and for what purpose they should use it.
This new sharingan has about the same abilities as the red one except that it somehow allows the user to have a blue flame that he/she can shape however he/she wants and fully control. (instead of the black flames that burn anything you see) The sharingan is at it's strongest state when the user is calm or rather happy. The element that almost all members of the Ochara clan is born with isn't fire, it's water.
Since then they had lived in peace out in the Fire country, thinking they could always be there safely. Although only a few years ago the clan was attacked by an unknown threat and almost everyone got wiped out, the survivors ran to the only place they knew they might be safe, Konohagakure.(i know it's rather normal about the whole family dead story...so if it's not okay i might skip that)
The char i'd like to create is called Satoru Ochara. At the attack he had only been in school for a year and he had only learnt the basics but then suddenly most of his entire clan got wiped out, including his cute little sister which he loved very much. So he ran away and ever since then he has gotten more and more like the original Uchiha clan. He started school and he was always the one who was the best in the class even though he was always quiet and rather sad. but then one day he fell for a girl and she completely changed him. She made him happy again, they got into the same group in the Genin exam. (when you become a genin) He was so happy about this that he awakened his Blue sharingan. With the sharingan the group was the one everyone thought would win the Chuunin exam but in the it, the girl was terribly hurt and in rage he attacked the one who hurt her. But when he tried to use his sharingan something was wrong, he had awakened the Red sharingan. Noone in his clan had awakened it since the clan broke up but here he was with it. He murdered the guy to save her but since that moment she had never looked at him the same. He passed that stage of the exam and in the end he got to the final stage. He was up against the girl he loved, he couldn't do it. He failed the exam because he wouldn't fight her, no matter how much she begged him. He went to the hokage and decided to instead get an other team, the hokage allowed him. So now a few years later he had taken the exam again and succeded, right now they are discussing if he should become a Juunin and he has applied for the ANBU.
This is what i got so far and i'm sorry if it's too much like an other story but i'd like to hear what you have to say about it but i'd be glad if you simply told me what to change instead of telling me to forget the idea or something like that. I will come up with some other parts of the story if i have to but this is what i present to you.
My backstory doesn't include death like uchihas.......
Early Life-"16 years after the great 4th shinobi war on a clear October 10 night a unknown lone guard was patrolling the outer side of the great gates the guard was strolling along when he heared a very familiar noise a new born baby crying he grew very aware as he burst into a charge and as he gotten closer to the crying he stopped to a powerful chakra and he gets in killing position as he approach a man with a purple blanket and he raised his sword while charging but the man who was in a silhouette form hit him with just his pinky as the guard hit the tree the man hand him the child and as the guard was about to get up the man looked into his eyes and instantly the man uttered a question "Who are you? Madara or nagato" and the silhouette man dissappeared like a ghost and the injured guard hurried to the konoha hospital. To see if the baby had any injuries and as he runs though the roof tops he bullet himself though the door asking for a doctor and a nurse only two people got up the doctor told him to take the baby to the nurse and as he does what he is told the doctor started to ask questions "are you the babies father?" He replied in a blunt lie "yes I'm....saioto Hagoromo" the doctor shock to see a living hagoromo clan member and as they talked the nurse ran out with a fearful look and both saioto and the doctor runs to the nursery and as saito was about to open the door the nurse asked both of them "have you. Seen the boys eyes???" The doctor replied "no it must be a byakugan...." the nurse shook no and the doctor again replied "it can't be sharingan then it must be......." he hurried inside with saioto and as saioto pulled off. The sheets to uncover the baby with whiskers and a rinnegan the doctor informed the anbu and told saioto to meet at the hokage place and 15 minutes later he appeared in the office and as the hokage naruto uzumaki hands the baby over he ask if saioto could tell him as he pulled out a uzumaki symbol seal on the blanket and he hand over the baby to a nanny and naruto tells of this to saioto "it isn't shocking to find a baby with transplants mr.saioto and don't worry well find the real parents" saioto talked next "I apologize for my disrespect but we both know sho created that baby and ill raise him in his own clan culture and from that long day the child was teach in all 3 basic forms of ninjustu at the acedemy. While also going to a life of a priest monk taking up road blocks he even mastered all 5 basic elements but 3 more needs far more training as he couldn't be able to fully master sage mode because of the juhbi chakra and was taught by naruto kyuubi mode and rasegan and was freely quickly learning all of Ninjustu and even able to show a powerful chakra and physical properties
Appearance- Rikudou looks closely similar to naruto hair and whiskers but has a more built body and shows to wear a priest like clothes with his apparent fathers manganum
Abilities- like all rinnegan users he has the same abilities like. The 7 paths and all 8 elemental properties but has a higher ocsular useage in copying
Denied, I couldn't understand half of what you wrote, the spelling is simply atrocious; please run your application through a spellcheck before you post it. There's no mention of the bearing the Rinnegan had in his life, and its the same old same old "transplant" nonsense I've gotten so wearily tired of seeing. Randomly including Madara, Nagato or Obito won't help your case either, as among those, none of them ever managed to attain the Rinnegan legitimately.
So no, I'm not gonna authorize the Rinnegan for you.
My spelling is. Correct and if your a true fan you'll know madara unlocked his though a near death obito transplanted and nagato awakened his my character is of a new way and yes I make theory's of the sage people agree he is a uzumaki and the fact is he had the rinnegan when he was born
I could care less about all of that. I've already given you my answer, you can argue with it if you want, but it won't lead to anything unless you can grant me a justification which is significantly better than the one you've provided me. For future reference, I expect more of you than I do of Kishimoto.
After observing a repeated pattern in this user's edits and articles, I've come here to make a report.
During my searches in the wiki, I've seen, time after time, that User:EnDagger was using Fairy Tail characters in his articles. At first, I found it normal, because other users do so as well. But then, after reading one of his articles, I noticed that entire sections were completely copied from the original character's page in Fairy Tail wiki. I've noticed it first with Yameru, then with Akane Hamako, then with Osanai, and finally with Uoza, copied from Flare Corona (copied powers, appearance and personality), Ultear Milkovich (copied powers, appearance and background), Frosch (everything copied) and Pisces (everything copied), respectively.
This is something that personally annoys me, and I've warned the user in the talk pages of the articles, but it's gone out of hand, and it's much better if an admin deals with the situation.
I would like to ask permission for the use of sharingan and mangekyo sharingan on my characters Furasshu and Naran. Naran's overall skill in sharingan and mangekyo would focus on the ability of genjutsu, including the ability "to get out" or see through another's genjutsu. This ability would stem from growing up in a genjutsu using family that includes his older brother Shisui Uchiha, a master at ocular genjutsu. It also would stem from his desire for revenge against the Hidden Leaf village after he (literally) came home to death on his doorstep, as well as his ambition to pass his siblings in their genjutsu skills. Otherwise, that's about how far his skills would stretch in his sharingan. His mangekyo, on the other hand, would come from all the death he found awaiting him after he returned to the Uchiha part of town, as well as finding all his friends and family murdered in their homes. The mangekyo would advance his genjutsu abilities with the addition of two new techniques, though the chakra drain from these two techniques would be significantly greater then. As for Furasshu, his sharingan and Mangekyo sharingan would focus on Space-Time ninjutsu, such as Kamui, giving a voice to his desire to go back in time and make up for the mistakes that he made that would lead to the gain of his mangekyo. These events or "mistakes" include the death of his mother, the loss of his sister to the Suna ninja, the banishment from Sunagakure, and having to fend for both himself and his younger brother Renvo on the streets of Konoha. These all create his desire to master space-time ninjutsu, if not to reverse time, to prevent these atrocities from happening again. Since Furasshu's sharingan and mangekyo would revolve around space-time ninjutsu, the strain on his chakra would be greater, since he hasn't mastered it to the level of Kakashi or Obito, however, he would be proficient enough to use to get out of tight situations. Last but not least, I would like to add sharingan to Shizune Uchiha. Her skill in sharingan, especially having two brothers (Naran and Shisui) who rely heavily on genjutsu, would be perception. While not a master of genjutsu, she is netherless adequate, though her overall inexperience with using genjutsu would cause a much deeper chakra drain on her then her two brothers. However, her perception and sight are top-notch, making the use of genjutsu on her just that, useless. Her while aim while using her sharingan is deathly accurate as well because of her ability to see chakra flow, and since she uses her sharingan often, the chakra drain of keeping it active is minimal. The amount of tomoes that she has is all three tomoes, with the last coming from seeing all the death that was in the Uchiha village after the massacre.
These seem to me, to be extremely generic attempts at getting the Sharingan and Mangekyō Sharingan for your characters. I like to think that those whom are to be given these bloodlines should actually show some relevant history which do not necessarily include extremely obvious Women in Refrigerators, Dead Family Members or other overused and clichéd tropes and ideas that you introduce solely to get these two powers. From what I've seen, it would appear that pretty much all Uchiha members on this site have lead a crappy childhood with random killing sprees and murders. So if you hadn't gathered by now, I decline your request.
Because none of them followed our manual of styles here, and all of them violated several of our policies. This including the Sharingan Policy and the Kekkei Genkai Restriction policy which prevents any new fanon KG from being made before the 30th of June. The consequences of breaching these policies is immediate deletion of the offending article.
I'm a new user here and I read the policy about the Rinnegan that Chrono, Kaze and the others introduced to me. I would like for one of my characters to use the Rinnegan, if you may. His name is Jinwu Azashiro, the Seventh Hokage. He's going to be the only character using it.
Backstory on how he got it:
Jinwu, hoping to discover many secrets of the shinobi world, traveled to various places, studying mystical lore of much kind. Discovering the Mountainside Graveyard, he ventured deep within it's confines. Finding the remains of much experimentation, he looked at the research notes that were left behind by both Orochimaru (who visited and used the place after the Fourth Shinobi World War prior to abandoning the place) and Madara Uchiha, who stayed there for a brief amount of time until his death. Once reading everything, he understood the slab that was hidden underneath the Naka Shrine. He also discovered the secret of activating the legendary Dojutsu of the Sage who sealed Datara the Ten-Tails - the Rinnegan. He had to infuse the DNA of a Senju and an Uchiha together to gain it. Already having Uchiha blood inside him due to his mother's heritage of being an Uchiha, he had to find Senju DNA. Continually looking, he came across the remains of a white clone of a musterious creature. Implanting some of it's DNA into him he started to feel a weird sensation, his body responding to the DNA. He started to act weird as it was in immense pain. He ran across the place to the shore of an underground lake located in the compound. He passed soon after. Ten days later, the pain stopped and he felt a change. Looking in the reflection of the water, he saw that his eyes changed to a ripple-like pattern. Remembering the notes detailing it's identity, he laughed maniacally saying he finally gained what he truly wanted, which helped him further his goal. He marked the place with a special seal so that he can come back anytime, using it as his secret base.
Shinra Tōsekiki (神羅投石機, Almighty Ballistae): Shinra Tōsekiki allows Jinwu to suspend physical matter within a five meter radius of himself and suspend them in the air, be they stationery or incoming, before launching them as projectiles at terrifying velocities (like bullets), making them virtually impossible to dodge without the aid of speed enhancements or position-altering space-time ninjutsu, and defend against without an extremely durable defense, although the materials which compose it may be rendered ineffective, depending on what elements are being manipulated as projectiles. He may use this ability on surrounding opponents, similar to Shinra Tensei, however he may control where they're sent flying to a greater degree. Chakra itself cannot be manipulated by this technique, and hence when it enters the radius in which this ability is executed, it will be repelled as though it impacted upon a gravitational wall.
Kussetsu Tensei (屈折天征, Universal Refraction): Jinwu locks an incoming, elemental technique, absorbs it via physical contact with his palm and recreates it (in his palm), before unleashing it at the initial instigator. So long as the technique absorbed is elemental, it can be absorbed, so long as it can be created through regular means (meaning that techniques associated with Kekkei Genkai other than the Rinnegan cannot be recreated (although they can still be absorbed (if elemental))).
Shinra Seigyo (全能制御, Almighty Control): Targeting the base-terrain in front of him, Jinwu traps a significant portion of it within a large cube of gravity, levitating the entrapped element(s) up into the air. At the flick of his hand, the cube explodes, leading to the previously-entrapped element(s) to gush out towards the target location in front of Jinwu's standing position. Alternatively, he can have the cube implode, gravitationally-crushing all tangible elements inside into an absolute mess. In the case of water for example, he can via this technique, generate a massive tidal wave, or if he opts to manipulate a larger cube, generate a colossal tsunami. Of course, this technique affects just about every tangible terrain in existence.
Kami e no Fukujū (神への服従, Obedience to God): The user increases the gravity around one area, crushing the terrain beneath the influx of pressure and those situated above it. Depending on the amount of force the user puts in this technique, it can easily shatter wood, bones, metal, or stone walls. Generally the more elevated those caught within the technique's range, the more damage they will take when their descent is accelerated. This technique is especially effective in both damaging and immobilizing those within its range, however the user is unable to utilize any others until this has ended. Depending on how long this technique is active, the cool-down that ensues afterwards (five seconds being the minimum) is extended as a result.
Gravity Armour (威厳の鎧, Igen no Yoroi):This technique allows Jinwu to generate an invisible, gravitational force-field with a thickness of, and spanning out 5cm from his body. From what can be considered a more supplementary version of Shinra Tensei, it deflects physical, exterior forces whilst promoting a limited form of levitation. The gravity composing the armour can be manipulated to a reasonable extent, easily wrapping over handheld weaponry either to amplify the armor's own range and capabilities in deflecting external objects, and as mediums for other Deva Path-affiliated techniques. Ultimately, it gives Jinwu an edge against other melee fighters, promoting usage of Nintaijutsu. It also has the ability to bypass the powers of a chakra-cloaked opponent, touching the "substantial body" beneath whatever protection the chakra-generated armour provides, such as in the cases of a bijū's chakra cloak and those wrapped in Lightning Release Armour. This technique may not be applied to attacks that do not originate from Jinwu's body save for weapons.
That's all. I hope I can get a positive response from this. See ya soon, I hope.
Everything here is original and of my own creation.
Before I begin, I'm happy to see that you've got good grammar and spelling, it helps a lot aesthetically that you're capable of forming a concrete sentence and use advanced words. You'd be surprised at how many applicants utterly fail in this department.
First off, the story is WAY too simplistic and vague; do you even know how many Uchiha are liable to have some measure of Senju DNA, or vice-versa for that matter? The Senju and the Uchiha were the first two clans of Konohagakure, there's likely been quite a bit of intermixing over the century or so since Konoha's forming. There ought to have been several children born with both genes, so how come they never received the Rinnegan? The explanation, as it is given in canon, has so many holes as being rendered pretty much unusable. Furthermore, the appearance of the Zetsu Clone is just.. pathetically convenient, this background feels forced and unremarkable on your part. Clearly written for the express purpose of getting your hands on the Rinnegan, nothing else.
As for the associated techniques. Most of them are clearly, in undue magnitude inspired by, or even outright ripped off from the Deva Path's own techniques. They're also extremely vague, and do not in any case try to explain how a technique actually works, that's bull. Explaining how these techniques works are actually DEMANDED of a Rinnegan Application. In no uncertain terms, and with a level of detail which does the piece justice, while I detect one or two original works there, they're fundamentally unimpressive and fairly bland, and they too lack proper documentation.
With all these things in mind, I formally decline your application for the Rinnegan. Good day!