So I got some inspiration and I added some more to it. Here's basically the gist of it.
His family is the The Kou Household a small noble clan of red hairs in Sunagakure. The household isn't anything special ability wise, just royalty. His parents were the former heads of the household but tried to hide Akagi's birth in fear of him being assassinated. His parents were killed because his uncle wanted the head position (I know cliche lol). but since they didn't know Akagi was born, they left before they could finish the job. That's where we started (I just needed the background, the reason and stuff). Shigeo and Kankuro raise him as there own, Shigeo going as far as making sure no one mentions his nobility around him (Akagi believes his estranged treatment was due to just being the son of those two). And viola. Sorry to post it on your wall, I didn't want to forget. I wanted to make sure it would fit our current story.
Njalm2 i need your help.I received a warning for accusing a user named Prodigy for taken credit for Takigakure. As you may know it is a canon village.He claims that it belongs to him which,It doesn't it belongs to the creators of Naruto,Kishimotio.Can you you help?I tried to edit the page but he just un-edited it.
When you see a property tag on someone's page, it means that the article itself belongs to them. In this case, the content doesn't belong to Prodigy, however, the article does. You must always ask the article's owner for permission before editing their page.
Hi, Njalm! I know we don't talk too much, but it's good to see you're back. I've been in touch with your situation, although I don't know any details except for the ones in the message walls. I don't want to intrude, but just know what you have my support on whatever issue you had, because I know that, if you did act wrong, you didn't do it purposely and, in all honesty, I didn't notice anything was going on around here :P
You've done much for the community, because when you were nominated an admin, after a short while, there was more organization in your field of action. Sorry if this message is all over, I'm HORRIBLE at organizing my thoughts XD
I'm just happy you guys came to a middle ground and something was arranged.
I would like to create a clan called the Ochara Clan. The Ochara's history is that many years ago, a few members of the Uchiha clan realised that there was a way to use the Sharingan without the rage and without the revenge. When they had realised that, something happened to the Sharingan and it made it blue. They got kicked out of the Uchiha clan and decided to create their own clan outside of Konohagakure. The new clan set base at a secret place in the fire country and had its own school where the clan got taught how to use their abilities and for what purpose they should use it.
This new sharingan has about the same abilities as the red one except that it somehow allows the user to have a blue flame that he/she can shape however he/she wants and fully control. (instead of the black flames that burn anything you see) The sharingan is at it's strongest state when the user is calm or rather happy. The element that almost all members of the Ochara clan is born with isn't fire, it's water.
Since then they had lived in peace out in the Fire country, thinking they could always be there safely. Although only a few years ago the clan was attacked by an unknown threat and almost everyone got wiped out, the survivors ran to the only place they knew they might be safe, Konohagakure.(i know it's rather normal about the whole family dead story...so if it's not okay i might skip that)
The char i'd like to create is called Satoru Ochara. At the attack he had only been in school for a year and he had only learnt the basics but then suddenly most of his entire clan got wiped out, including his cute little sister which he loved very much. So he ran away and ever since then he has gotten more and more like the original Uchiha clan. He started school and he was always the one who was the best in the class even though he was always quiet and rather sad. but then one day he fell for a girl and she completely changed him. She made him happy again, they got into the same group in the Genin exam. (when you become a genin) He was so happy about this that he awakened his Blue sharingan. With the sharingan the group was the one everyone thought would win the Chuunin exam but in the it, the girl was terribly hurt and in rage he attacked the one who hurt her. But when he tried to use his sharingan something was wrong, he had awakened the Red sharingan. Noone in his clan had awakened it since the clan broke up but here he was with it. He murdered the guy to save her but since that moment she had never looked at him the same. He passed that stage of the exam and in the end he got to the final stage. He was up against the girl he loved, he couldn't do it. He failed the exam because he wouldn't fight her, no matter how much she begged him. He went to the hokage and decided to instead get an other team, the hokage allowed him. So now a few years later he had taken the exam again and succeded, right now they are discussing if he should become a Juunin and he has applied for the ANBU.
This is what i got so far and i'm sorry if it's too much like an other story but i'd like to hear what you have to say about it but i'd be glad if you simply told me what to change instead of telling me to forget the idea or something like that. I will come up with some other parts of the story if i have to but this is what i present to you.
My backstory doesn't include death like uchihas.......
Early Life-"16 years after the great 4th shinobi war on a clear October 10 night a unknown lone guard was patrolling the outer side of the great gates the guard was strolling along when he heared a very familiar noise a new born baby crying he grew very aware as he burst into a charge and as he gotten closer to the crying he stopped to a powerful chakra and he gets in killing position as he approach a man with a purple blanket and he raised his sword while charging but the man who was in a silhouette form hit him with just his pinky as the guard hit the tree the man hand him the child and as the guard was about to get up the man looked into his eyes and instantly the man uttered a question "Who are you? Madara or nagato" and the silhouette man dissappeared like a ghost and the injured guard hurried to the konoha hospital. To see if the baby had any injuries and as he runs though the roof tops he bullet himself though the door asking for a doctor and a nurse only two people got up the doctor told him to take the baby to the nurse and as he does what he is told the doctor started to ask questions "are you the babies father?" He replied in a blunt lie "yes I'm....saioto Hagoromo" the doctor shock to see a living hagoromo clan member and as they talked the nurse ran out with a fearful look and both saioto and the doctor runs to the nursery and as saito was about to open the door the nurse asked both of them "have you. Seen the boys eyes???" The doctor replied "no it must be a byakugan...." the nurse shook no and the doctor again replied "it can't be sharingan then it must be......." he hurried inside with saioto and as saioto pulled off. The sheets to uncover the baby with whiskers and a rinnegan the doctor informed the anbu and told saioto to meet at the hokage place and 15 minutes later he appeared in the office and as the hokage naruto uzumaki hands the baby over he ask if saioto could tell him as he pulled out a uzumaki symbol seal on the blanket and he hand over the baby to a nanny and naruto tells of this to saioto "it isn't shocking to find a baby with transplants mr.saioto and don't worry well find the real parents" saioto talked next "I apologize for my disrespect but we both know sho created that baby and ill raise him in his own clan culture and from that long day the child was teach in all 3 basic forms of ninjustu at the acedemy. While also going to a life of a priest monk taking up road blocks he even mastered all 5 basic elements but 3 more needs far more training as he couldn't be able to fully master sage mode because of the juhbi chakra and was taught by naruto kyuubi mode and rasegan and was freely quickly learning all of Ninjustu and even able to show a powerful chakra and physical properties
Appearance- Rikudou looks closely similar to naruto hair and whiskers but has a more built body and shows to wear a priest like clothes with his apparent fathers manganum
Abilities- like all rinnegan users he has the same abilities like. The 7 paths and all 8 elemental properties but has a higher ocsular useage in copying
Denied, I couldn't understand half of what you wrote, the spelling is simply atrocious; please run your application through a spellcheck before you post it. There's no mention of the bearing the Rinnegan had in his life, and its the same old same old "transplant" nonsense I've gotten so wearily tired of seeing. Randomly including Madara, Nagato or Obito won't help your case either, as among those, none of them ever managed to attain the Rinnegan legitimately.
So no, I'm not gonna authorize the Rinnegan for you.
My spelling is. Correct and if your a true fan you'll know madara unlocked his though a near death obito transplanted and nagato awakened his my character is of a new way and yes I make theory's of the sage people agree he is a uzumaki and the fact is he had the rinnegan when he was born
I could care less about all of that. I've already given you my answer, you can argue with it if you want, but it won't lead to anything unless you can grant me a justification which is significantly better than the one you've provided me. For future reference, I expect more of you than I do of Kishimoto.
After observing a repeated pattern in this user's edits and articles, I've come here to make a report.
During my searches in the wiki, I've seen, time after time, that User:EnDagger was using Fairy Tail characters in his articles. At first, I found it normal, because other users do so as well. But then, after reading one of his articles, I noticed that entire sections were completely copied from the original character's page in Fairy Tail wiki. I've noticed it first with Yameru, then with Akane Hamako, then with Osanai, and finally with Uoza, copied from Flare Corona (copied powers, appearance and personality), Ultear Milkovich (copied powers, appearance and background), Frosch (everything copied) and Pisces (everything copied), respectively.
This is something that personally annoys me, and I've warned the user in the talk pages of the articles, but it's gone out of hand, and it's much better if an admin deals with the situation.