If you're referring to the Yamanaka and Inuzuka Clans techniques, click edit on that page. At the bottom of the page, there's a link called Clan::insert clan name here| . If you copy the link and add your clans name to a technique, it will show up in the clans Infobox. Here's a page that does have the link Fang Passing Fang.
I read over the Parch Release, and since I am the unofficial de-facto reviewer of Nature Transformations, I am tasked with pointing out the errors of such, or other jargon.
In anycase, you need to delete it. Flat out. It's the exact same thing as Scorch Release. So if you were going to use this an advanced form of 'Scorch Release', I advise you to simply make a Scorch Release user, and provide the details to how he could amp up his power, and make it worth the read, etc.
Notice: I will not review it a second time, please remove it as soon as you can. Thank you.
I also read the blog and checked the Rp. How exactly would Kiba be able to put my character in a genjutsu if his sight was obsured by a smokescreen? A Sharingan needs eye contact for a genjutsu to work and his sight was obscured for the duration of the turn.
I don't think, Kuuhaku could tough talk when he is pain, even if he knows he is in the genjutsu, he can still feel the pain........ and I don't think he could order around his chakra chains with the menatl agony he is in. Okay the Dark Chains sensed foreign chakra, what are they ? living beings ? to move around freely ? they are supposed to be controled by the user ryt ? And even if Kuuhaku has broken the genjutsu, I don't think even the best of the best ninja's would stand up has if nothing happened, there has to be some after effect psychological stuff in his brains,
While I will admit to first part of your statement. The only thing you stated in the genjutsu was that he was tied up in metal ropes and nothing more. He wasnt seeing any mental images, the only thing he felt was mental pain and still could see Kiba meaning he would be able to control the chains to a certain extent if he can endure the pain
Allright, that surely explains it, though Kuuhaku is really tired now after enduring the mental pain, He is facing the crow clone now, and I will do my turn later on, as I am not in the best situation for a comeback. Meanwhile waiting for the new chapter.
Been a lot busy these days, whenever I had the time to come over here I was in Troll Condition or the Server would be down..... Sorry if you are waiting a lot, just wait for some more. Sorry about the long absence.